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نوشته اصلی توسط Saba_Baran90

...Some Promises are always unbroken

....Some memories are always unwritten

Feel the magic of true relation and you'll realize that true feelings are always Unspoken of
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i have always loved your nice sentences this one's really meaningful

نوشته اصلی توسط bigbang

of............................................what ?try to end your sentence
always i am fulfill of energy
but you guys just disappoint me
where are you don,t lie to us the university actually start recently and the semis term and its home works and projects are not starts
until you have time you should go here to warm up this place
and miss don,t see the glee series i think it has affected on you !
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i want to work on my conversation
because i think i want to learn another language too and its Germany
yea but i don,t have enough skill in english soo i try to learn it in the way that some day i can call my self an expert english learner but you guys just not here
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good for u mohamad, how can u be so energetic? i come to this conclusion that you have no pure feelings ! i'm sorry, but from now on 'az in be bad' i will definitely point your mistakes in posts like it or not, i WILL do that !

first: tell me why do you use , instead of ' to form abbreviated forms?
second: adverbs of frequency come after the main verb so, you'd better say: i am always full of energy
third: for God's sake! obey the rules of times ! when you say the university, you must use a single verb suitable for the third person singular ! so you'd better say: the university starts not start.
forth: i think its homework is a literally translation, you'd better say: the homework ! just it !
fifth: what is are not starts? tell me, what does it mean? who has taught you English? kidding, but if you say this sentence to a native speaker, he/she may become hanged up ! you'd better say: has not started yet
sixth: go here is not correct, say: come here !
seventh: again you don't obey the rules for tenses and persons ! series is plural but you use a singular verb: has, that's wrong
eighth: if you want to say 'root tasie dashte' do not say: it has affected on you ! i have a suggestion for you: read the axford dictionary sometimes ! that would be useful and then you may understand differences between similar words, listen, if you want to use affect, you say: it has affected you or it has affects on you. the first affect is a verb, while the second one is a noun.
ninth: before every thing: congratulations, learning a new language is always enjoyable, i appreciate you for your decision. now your mistakes: Germany means 'alman' that's the name of the country, while German means 'almani' and that's the language people use in order to speak in Germany land
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tenth: just not here is wrong! you, yourself, say the correct form !


ok, 10 mistakes in the first post that i studied, not bad ! try more and more, today i went to a class one of the students of computer had to defend his proposal, and it was all in fluent english
so, english is useful ! try not to have mistakes good boy