The Story of PCcity

[KHatun]

I'm a little confused now Saba
there are two lines one is what you said about the thing that had been taken away from the guy, and the other line repeats how it changed his life
after mehregan's sentence which says I could sense things and explains how, there must come a sentence related to the robbery
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[Saba_Baran90]

Ok! you know whAt guys?We are all confused!And this whole confusion thing will go on unless we figure sth out for it!
What about the role thing we talked about?This is confusing cuz all of us playing the being the narrator
we should think of a general plot and then expand it,elaborate it, like cooardinating one another!
?what say u

[KHatun]

نوشته اصلی توسط Saba_Baran90

Ok! you know whAt guys?We are all confused!And this whole confusion thing will go on unless we figure sth out for it!
What about the role thing we talked about?This is confusing cuz all of us playing the being the narrator
we should think of a general plot and then expand it,elaborate it, like cooardinating one another!
?what say u

I agree. we need to make up a plot first. these kind of theme-based, psychological stories are very subjective, so it's almost impossible to expand it in a way to satisfy everyone
stream of consciousness does not accept pause
well...let's go on in this way
the guy wakes up wondering why he feels so different that day
something must have happened, for example a thing had been taken away from him, or something/someone had entered his room

[Saba_Baran90]

نوشته اصلی توسط KHatun

I agree. we need to make up a plot first. these kind of theme-based, psychological stories are very subjective, so it's almost impossible to expand it in a way to satisfy everyone

stream of consciousness does not accept pause
well...let's go on in this way
the guy wakes up wondering why he feels so different that day
something must have happened, for example a thing had been taken away from him, or something/someone had entered his room

That's good
He could have also felt like something is gonna happen that !day,something that will change his life forever
now the Question is WHO IS GONNA PLAY HIS CHARACTER?I mean who is gonna be who?
I think u R better that us, at least that me
!SO u'd better be him or wait a min,HER